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Life lession
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Life lession
Life lession
It's almost midnight,
And I have finally arrived,
Sleeping at my sight,
Nobody waits for you to wake up,
Only me in this fight,
My friend, my friend,
I don't want to wait 'till the end,
'till you wake up to this land,
Sleep well, don't rush,
I even bought you some food,
After you'll wash,
When you wake up,
But don't rush, don't rush,
My friend, my friend,
I don't want to wait 'till the end,
'till you wake up to this land,
A week has passed,
I didn't move from this place,
I'm not relaxed,
I don't feel so good,
I need a little rest,
I hope you don't mind if I take a seat, next to you, to sleep...
It's almost midnight,
And I have finally arrived,
Sleeping at my sight,
Nobody waits for you to wake up,
Only me in this fight,
My friend, my friend,
I don't want to wait 'till the end,
'till you wake up to this land,
Sleep well, don't rush,
I even bought you some food,
After you'll wash,
When you wake up,
But don't rush, don't rush,
My friend, my friend,
I don't want to wait 'till the end,
'till you wake up to this land,
A week has passed,
I didn't move from this place,
I'm not relaxed,
I don't feel so good,
I need a little rest,
I hope you don't mind if I take a seat, next to you, to sleep...
Re: Life lession
O adevarata lectie intradevar apreciez foarte mult organizarea strofica , si faptul ca ai scris poezia in engleza intradefar rima poate nu a iesit perfecta , dar compozitia ta exprima un mesaj ceea ce este foarte important;) . Toate respectele mele !
Darky- Membru Incepator
- Mesaje : 336
Data de inscriere : 29/04/2012
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Localizare : Tehnic vorbind nu stiu exact :-? putem fi in mijlocul universului sau la periferie
Re: Life lession
Vezi, sună mult mai bine în engleză. Are flow, are un ritm așa mai melodramatic. E profundă, un pic tristă, mi-am imaginat-o cu un pian lent în fundal. Reușit, așa să le tot dai. Bine, Silviule, la poezie ne dai clasă
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